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Really good

"The storyline is really good and would like you to continue the story pls. I really like your way of writing and hope you become famous soon!!"

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Needs Improvement

"Hello, there! Your summary caught my attention and I just got the chance to read it. Actually, the prologue was good, but you can simply put the rest into one chapter. I think you need to write more details, too, like the interior of the coffee shop, or the house, etc. Well, I might update the review when you write more. Keep up! Regards, Kei Angelus"

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