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"It's a good beginning of a series with reading the books. I do have a few hints. It might be a good idea to summarise the tekst in the books if you let them read a big part. This is mosty because we all already know how the actual books go, we want to know how the readers react to it. Doing this might also give you a bigger chance of posting more of the story, a lot of sites don't like it when the material source is just coppied. Second tip: try to be consistant. With this I want to say choose which font to use for the actual books and which for the reactions. Keep to that decission throughout the series. Lastly,but not any less important: KEEP WRITING! This story has a pretty good start, not having Harry actually there ads a new demension to it, which I def. like. It gives the characters that know Harry from the future a better chance to know what his life was ACTUALLY like. I think Ron and Malfoy would definitly benifit from this. So, thank you for writing this so far and I hope that you will continue with this."