What is your opinion?
I'll show you mine, if
"John did a very good job on this story. It was well written and fun to read. There was never a dull moment in the story. The characters were all conceived. "
I'll show you mine if
"Story of teenage love tenderly described by this author whose flippant remarks throughout the narrative are cause for a chuckle now and then. An enjoyable read! "
I’ll show you mine
"An amazing read incredibly well written. Sweet story of young love with a twist and a happy ending. LOVED IT"
I'll show you mine, if ...
"A well written story of first love for two teenagers. Then misunderstood reasons leads to a long separation of 10 years ... The author, who is quite the wordsmith, describes characters and locations with great finesse."
I will show you mine if
"I love everything about the book and I will definitely recommend it to my friends "
A love story
"I liked the plot, but it was a little predictable, knowing JS’s plot style, and I like that about his writing. His stories are well written, the language, grammar and spelling make for an easy and enjoyable read. His work isn’t raunchy, his descriptions are delicate and that’s what makes his stories romantic. A good read"
I'll show you mine...
"In a word, engrossing. The visualization that the author created, made me think I was watching a movie. He makes you feel like you know these two people, as they discover each other. A definite feel good story with a happy ending, how unusual. I will admit that the recapping of the story within conversations was a little distracting once or twice, however, I understand why it was there. I so look forward to other stories by this author, and hope they are as entertaining as "I'll show you mine...""
I’ll show you mine if
"An awesome book, thoroughly described in the perfect way!"
Different
"It is a different kind of novel. Kinda unique! Slow in beginning but heats up as promised.. Liked it!!!"
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"Romantique, fresh, naturel, pure love... Sooo well written. But need to not repeat informations in the same chapter un l'essentiel it has a purpose."
Classic!
"I thoroughly enjoyed and appreciated this piece. It was such a beautiful story about young love and all the fun of "exploration" that comes with it. The revelation towards the end that explains the sudden halt in the main characters' time together was wholly unexpected but extremely well written. I would definitely recommend this read!"
Wonderful !!!!!!
"I can’t stop reading this."
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"Unexpectedly awesome. Love the plot. Thank you for writing something different but really lovely reading."
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"What a beautiful and moving story of awakening love! An unplanned meeting between a shy but extremely mature and well endowed 13 year-old boy, and an almost 15 year-old girl with a mind of her own, unfolds a sweetly erotic and delightful tale. I loved it! Sometimes hilariously funny in their innocent discovery of one another, and later rather sad as they were thrust apart for reasons that neither of them could fathom. I was enthralled by it so much that I could not put it down until it reached the inevitable happy ending. Once again I am astounded at the ingenuity of this outstanding author."
Not just an erotic story.
"This is one of the most beautiful pieces I have ever read. The author has captured emotions so beautifully. Usually, teenage hormonal behaviour is looked down upon, it's orthodox and labelled silly but the author has written the characters so well, you can feel their innocence and their overwhelming thoughts. They developed such strong hearts yet were not hesitant to listen to their hearts in the end. "
Very interesting but there were parts I need to skip because they were repeated
"This was very exciting to read , it is a good story of being exploring and experiencing but need more direct to get you in hedge all the times instead of skipping "
I'll Show You Mine If...
"A beautiful summer romance. The discovery, hormones, love and learning everything you can into a few weeks. Absolutely brave and wonderful. Then the realization of real life and growing up... A big unexpected twist, what will happen? Read and find out! You did it again John. Thank you. 💘"
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"❤ Sweet, Sweet, Sweet ❤ I absolutely loved this story. It ended too soon 😉 First loves, and all the experimentation that comes with, trying to squeeze it all in before summer break comes to an all too disappointing end 😞 I think we all have experiences from that age that we hold dear, and this story couldn't be more on point in bringing those memories flooding back. Such a beautiful love story... Well, you'll see 🥰 "
Heart warming
"From the beginning I was hooked on the book. Definitely one of these books that you can’t stop reading until it’s finished. If you up for romance and good writing I will suggest you give it a read. 🌼"
I’ll show you mine, if...
"Young love, finally reacquainted. This was a sweet story. They needed time apart, to grow into the adults they were meant to become. I’m happy it all worked out, for them. It was clear that Steve enjoyed himself, during their period of discovery; but, other than some initial exploratory touching, on his part, I didn’t see her perspective on her own orgasms. I said that to say, she definitely knew what she wanted & instructed him on that; but, mostly to get him over his shyness & to pleasure him. Did she ever get “hers”? I enjoyed the story. "
