What is your opinion?
A good idea.
"The idea is a good one! Of how we can just conform to those around us, especially when we admire them, and then become just like them. For constructive criticism I wish the story was long, and that paragraphs were inserted. It would make the reading easier."
WOW!
"This is was good! It was so interesting!Good story! Keep up the good work!"
Story is great, but too short!
"I think the premise of the story itself is absolutely great and interesting, also a very real issue of us in society. But you could have done a lot more with your idea, it's really a shame that you decided to give everything in one chapter and finish it just like that. This story could have made a lot more impact if you introduced your characters, your critical opinions, how things changed, why they changed. It could have been a lot more relatable to many and also educational and at the same time, fun with a twist of fiction. I think it would have gone better as a poem, or something similar, since it's too short to be classified as a 'book'. But it was well written and promising! Don't give up and maybe try to write a longer and more refined piece of work next time! I'm looking forward to see how far you can go! Much love, Coffee."
