Abby B

Hello, I'm Abby B, Christian and horse lover. I hope you have enjoyed my stories. These stories just a place where I can write for fun without worrying about making it perfect. Hope you enjoy! :)

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Nice

The cover of the book is utterly stunning and very beautiful, it is also fitting for what the book is about.

As for the story itself, it's a wonderful collection of little short stories picked and written to encourage people. It's quite enjoyable!

For constructive criticism I'd say the writing style and punctuation could be improved a bit. But other than that this was an enjoyable read.

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A good idea.

The idea is a good one! Of how we can just conform to those around us, especially when we admire them, and then become just like them.

For constructive criticism I wish the story was long, and that paragraphs were inserted. It would make the reading easier.

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Good

This poem/poems are very descriptive, offering a glimpse into what some veterans might have suffered.

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Could be Better

If I'm very brutally honest, this story seems the slightest bit childish. The writing style could also be improved. I wish that it would continue.

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Good Cover

The cover for the book is good, the horse on it is beautiful and it makes you want to click on it. However, the writing style of the story could be improved.

I also wish the story would continue, but I don't think it will. I think this is one of those stories on Inkitt that has been abandoned, sadly. If the author sees this I hope they will continue the story.

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Awesome!

I liked it! It's so hard to find Christian books in general on this sight, much less Christian Fantasy, so this was a welcome surprise. I can't wait to read the other two books in the series.

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Real

The character's feelings are real. I also really like their sarcasm! There does tend to be a bit of a information dump sometimes, and I would like the chapters to be longer, but over all, pretty good!:)

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Interesting

For the first few chapters they're are many details missing, added a level of suspense. The plot so far has been interesting. Both hate each other, yet are forced to marry each other.

The writing style could be improved a little. There's a bit of an information dump in Chapter 3, but in a way that is helpful to understanding the story.

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Only read the first few chapters

I've only read the first few chapters, but they were quite intriguing. In the prologue, when the girl was hiding, the author described her fear quite well. It was very tangible. What I think was the first chapter the pain and what was going on in her mind was also described brilliantly.

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Just read the start, seemed alright

I just read the start, seemed like an alright story. I myself am not much of a romance type. But that's alright. I think, for those that are interested, this might make a good story.

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Good Start

I only read the first chapter of the story, but so far it looks good. I enjoyed the writing style.

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I wish it would continue

For all I know, this story might have only been meant to have one chapter. It might have just been a short story. But I wish it would continue, for I enjoyed the writing style.

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A Nice Story

I would say that the author does know a good deal about horses, which was very nice because I could enjoy the story more without being bothered about the lack of horse knowledge. I think it was well written, a charming story. Personally I think the mare Honey may have become my favorite horse out of the whole deal. The ending was a bit predictable, but nice.

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Decent

This is not the best story I've ever read, but I finished it despite how long it was. I wish that it had focused more on the horses then on the romance, but that's alright. The authors writing style could stand to be improved.

The plot you could kinda see coming, but still, that wasn't all bad. It was good to see Alexi's and Juilius's love come to fruition in marriage. The ending was very good, in my opinion.

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What a good story!

This is a story of good men, who do their best to help others, and of good women, who also do the same. Their good character is very refreshing, and their love of work honorable. I enjoyed the story very much. I also really enjoyed how the main character, Durian, is not perfect, he is not flawless, but he tries his best.

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A Rare Good Horse Story

On this sight I find it hard to find good horse books, so this one was a treat. It was a very unusual idea and plot line, but a good one. I enjoyed it.

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Ah, a Wonderful Story about Horses

I loved it! I have not read the Lord of Rings series, but I didn't need to to understand this story. The gentleness of the elves in the way they handle horses is very beautiful.

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Wonderful Story

This is quite a unusual story that I really liked reading. To be honest, I have never read Lord of the Rings, so I did not see any resemblance to it, and only knew that the author borrowed ideas from the Lord of the Rings because she said so.

I quite liked the two main characters of Sian and Legolas. Sian because she is tough and sturdy, but still has emotion. Legolas with his calm feeling demeanor I also liked.

But what I really liked about the story was the horses. I'm a big horse fan. I love how the gray filly can sense Legolas's every move and obeys him willingly.

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A Book Review

This story has been very interesting. I really enjoy fantasy, and this story is very well written. I love the prologue beginning. It throws you into the midst of the excitement and suspense.

I also love the plot twist as to how the prince's sister is actually the descendant of a dragon as well. I also like the characters.

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