Wasn't Meant to Be
AN: The cover for this book was designed for me by @lonelyxzee so go get a cover done by her! Her Wattpad account is @heavenlyaxgel
I wasn’t meant to be a sword maiden.
But here I am, blocking a strike, the force of it ringing through my hands.
I didn’t think I’d ever fight the Ravagers the way I do now.
But here I am, crossing blades with one.
Never thought I’d have such dear friends.
But to my right fights Valeria and to my left battles Daxton.
I wasn’t meant to or didn’t think I’d ever become who I am today. But I am who I am. My name is Ravine SwordCleaver, and this is my story.
Hmm... this is just some constructive criticism, but a lot of this can be paragraphed differently. For example, the first part should be something like: "I wasn't... maiden, but..." if that makes sense. I think total this can be put into 4 paragraphs that are grammatically correct. That's the main thing that stood out to me. :)
Amazing start, excited to see where this goes
I really like the prologue