Inkitt
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"I like that the chapters are divided by color. Haven't seen that done before. -"They were an usual couple," the man says- One typo to correct from the first chapter. I think you meant for that to be unusual. Nice back and forth between Katniss and Peeta's narrations. I hope they're the only two. Sometimes a story can get bogged down with too many POVs. I' curious to learn what's the magic of the combs."

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