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held captive by the rogue

"love the story line and will miss the lover bird kat and chris so lovely couple"

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Held Captive by a Rogue

"You made everything seem so real that I started to dislike the characters very much. This is how you know you are a brilliant author. Keep up the good work"

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Brilliant story

"Brilliant read. Mystery suspense romance and rogues. How could it not be! "

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Excellent story

"Very well written. Exciting, emotional, fun, suspenseful and so much more. It grabs your attention and keeps it. I enjoyed this a lot. I read this on Inkitt and voluntarily review it. I recommend it."

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So far

"Interesting plot. Historical setting. Villains and heroes who don't communicate well. Well travelled story line."

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Jean9

"Grand story. "

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Enjoyment

"I really enjoyed our story :) kept me intrigued and on my toes for some of it."

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Nice pacing

"I've just read the first chapter so far, and I really enjoyed this. On the surface, the characters are what might be expected. The free-spirited daughter, the vain, cruel stepmother, the drunk of a father. However, I like how this explores those clichés and brings new life to them. There was a lot going on in the first chapter, and it was very fast-moving, which I definitely like. The thriller style writing with the old Victorian style setting is very unique and interesting. My only complaint is that I think that the setting and feel suffers from the break-neck pace. The reader doesn't get much of a sense of time or place, and it lacks atmosphere, so I think that some more description intermingled through the writing would help quite a bit. Also, there were a few areas when one of the characters was speaking and you forgot the last quotation mark, so the dialogue blended with the following action. Other than that, this is great work. I want to know what happens next! Great work! :-)"

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Held captive by a rogue

"A good read"

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