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Jess and Rich
"Great story!!"
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8 chapters read
Nice
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8 chapters read
The teacher's night in shining armor
"Love the story.❤️Still need some work on it.😁"
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8 chapters read
Teachers knight in shining armor.
"Great story! I hope you write more stories."
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6 chapters read
Inlove with the devil
"I loved this story .it taught me that love is not about money or status and it shows that forgiveness is the best medicine to cure internal old wounds."
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8 chapters read
Nice story
"Good thing it's fast and short. Problem with your style was no demarcation for different pov,and time line differences. Quites struggled while reading. Good luck for next one."
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7 chapters read
Stella and Rich
"Love the story. Short and direct to the point. No sideline stories... congratulations to the author. I just have a problem with the spacing and the punctuations. I dont know if they were talking or thinking"
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1 chapters read
Not Bad
"It was short and sweet. Needs a lot of editing and changes though.💯❤️"
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8 chapters read
Good story
"The story is amazing "
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The teachers knight in shining armor
"The author is a good story teller but needs to work on punctuation and grammar "
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Teacher's knight and shining armour
"The story was interesting, the only problem I had is that I found it confusing when it comes point of view, it was hard to understand who is at some point in the story but overall I like the story 😜"
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8 chapters read
The teachers knight and shining armor
"Absolutely incredible short story absolutely loved it ❤ 😍 "
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8 chapters read
Amazing story
"Fell in love with this story"
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8 chapters read
Plot
"It’s an okay story, but confusing as you don’t know who starts talking when"
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8 chapters read
it was good
"it was good but punctuation was not good."
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Teachers knight in shining armour
"Sweet love story "
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8 chapters read
Good
"Sweet, sad and hope it ends well. Good story🥰"
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7 chapters read
Omg Nice story
"Nice story and plots!!"
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The teachers Knight in shinning armour
"Great, thecstoty needs help eithvits grammar- too many errors "
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Amazing story!
"It’s an amazing story. I love the chemistry and the plot is really nice. But there are few problems with your writing style that you should work on and I am pretty sure that you can. At the end of the dialogue, you should mention the person’s name who said the dialogue. “You should read this book”, Mathew says like this. Also in the first couple of chapters, the dialogues aren’t in quotations which confused me a little. Another thing is that when you finish a scene, don’t move directly to the next scene. Instead, put “_____” or “***” when you want to move from one scene to another. There are also some grammatical errors and spelling mistakes here and there which is not a big problem and you can easily edit them. Otherwise everything is great. The main thing in a story is that the plot should be good and yours is so keep it up 👍🏻"
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