Second chance
"I like your story. Keep it up "
- Overall Rating
- Plot
- Writing Style
- Grammar & Punctuation


"I like your story. Keep it up "
"I really enjoyed your story it had passion for your characters. ❤️👏"
"This was a very cute and short story 💗💗💗"
"Loved it 🧡💛✨."
"Cute story. Watch grammar errors "
"When I was reading this, I felt that I am watching some kind of series a daily soap kind of feelings. It was not that kind of boring daily soaps but very interesting. The way she found her second life, her feelings and characters everything described beautifully. But I felt something lacking writer could have added some more description about the scenes. But the first part and the last part of the epilogue was really lovely. Yes there was some grammar and punctuation mistakes which the writer could correct if she edit them. Overall my time went good while reading this book. All the best to the author for her more future stories."
"The story was simple but creative. I’m still currently reading bug things are getting interesting!!! I actually like the plot. You’re a great writer, keep it up!"
"The dialogue was good, but I feel like there was a lot of feelings and emotions in the describing part of the story. Don't get me wrong, the feelings were strong, and it was a good book, but try to describe what's happening, ya know, what's going on within the storyline, not just the character's feelings."
"Story is good,but the author shoul atleast try to improved her grammar..."