review

"Bittersweet story for which I can find very little fault. The canon references were seamlessly woven into a very different story. It's one that could easily be converted to original fiction with just a few name changes. I see that you mention Peeta didn't see combat in the Pacific because it ended in the middle of August. That's the only indication of the time that he was with Katniss, other than that the lake was freezing. The statements might not be compatible. You might want to change one or the other, perhaps saying that the lake was cold, despite it being in the summer. It doesn't give too much away and I'd already guessed that Henry was his son anyway. Gorgeous lake picture."