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Loving Felix

"A fun book that I can relate to as I am a teen who falls for every hot guy I see as well. It's an excellent way of learning the modern life in another African country as I am in one myself. I need more from the book because I know that the story can go a long way."

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Loving Felix

"Read the first chapter and consider me hooked. As someone with ridiculous crushes through out my life I relate all to well to Cleo at this point. I love the fact that the book is so cultural, from the name to the way they speak. As Nigerian, Ghanaian languages have never sunk in even after living almost half my life here so I rarely understand but I always have fun hearing it. This is amazing. Aside from a few issues that editing that chapter can fix... I salute the author. "

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So far, so good

"Alright, I found the story quite sweet so far. It starts off pretty well and has a good description of characters. The summary is quite interesting as well. And there is adequate description of the environmental settings which I liked. However, there are some places that I think you might want to improve. Like, grammar and punctuation for instance. I saw that there were lowercase letters in the beginning of most of the sentences which I found a little disturbing as it was something I'm not used to. And I think the story needs a little work on present and past tense as they are mixed up at some places. But all in all, I'd say it's a really good story. I love the bits of humor in the story and think that it's going to be an interesting read once you overlook some of the errors. I hope this review helps a little! Keep up with your good work!"

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