Thorns_or_roses

Can't wait for more!

I must say, this story is different from all the cliches out there and I know I'm gonna follow this to the end. I really love the beginning, and everything after that. The protagonist is a strong, independent woman and has an impressive personality. I spotted some mixing up of past and present tense but another than that, this is a really promising story. Literally can't wait to read more! Good job, author! ❣

Has potential

Well, it's only one chapter so I can't really say much about it. However, here are the things I loved. The first thing, I love the blurb, how you've talked about the efforts of a girl into fitting in despite her pressure and fallouts with her friends. I like your selection of characters but I somehow felt like many characters were introduced at once so I got kinda confused somewhere. Maybe it's because I'm not really used to these names as you've assigned the characters so I couldn't differentiate one character from the other but maybe you might want to introduce the characters slowly, only a few at a time so that the readers get used to the idea first. Well that's what I think. Other than the small grammar errors here and there, I feel that your storyline is strong and has a potential to do a lot better! Would be waiting for more chapters! Good job! ❣❣

Can't wait for moreee 😍😍

This is SOOOO SWEET! God! I'm in love with Sky and Chris and Olivia and EVERYONE! I stayed up the whole night reading this and now I'm left desperately waiting for the next update! I loved it soo much! There were only a few grammar errors but other than that, I LOVE THIS STORY! Can't wait for another update! Great job, author!

Definitely 5 stars!

I've read only half of the story so far. Not because I didn't like it (trust me, it's far from that) but because this is the third book and the few chapters I've read made me want to binge read the while series. Which I'm gonna do as soon as humanly possible. You have such an impeccable way of writing that got me fooled to your book even when I didn't really know what was going on for the first few chapters as I haven't read the other books. I found myself wanting to read more and more and more of your words! The characters and events all seemed SO REAL! This book's gonna be in my reading lost for a long, long time! I really love what I've read so far and I'm sure I'll love it even more once I've read the first two books! Great job!❣

Loving this!

Wow!😍😍😍 I'm loving this A LOT! I absolutely love the characters here! Cora's badass attitude, quirky sense of humor and amazing personality has me swooning over her.😅 And there's Finn's intensity that I'm already a fan of! I love the plot, the storyline, the way of writing and everything! I can't wait for the next update! Good job, author! 💕❣

Sweet

Okay, I just finished this book and I must say, I'm in love with the characters here! You have given a really sweet description of the characters and the settings. However, I found a lot of grammar errors. Like I mentioned in the comment, you've put unnecessary inverted commas when the characters are not in conversations which made it quite confusing at times and I had to read the whole paragraph again for that to make sense. So maybe you want to remove those inverted commas and use it only while indicating dialogues. Then the next was with tense. I noticed that you mixed a lot of past and present verbs in the same paragraph. Also, there were quite a lot of spelling errors, for example, the bouquets, puncture and others. Lastly, I feel like it would have been better if you made a definite distinction while describing her dreams or nightmares, maybe italicize the paragraph? Other than these, I really loved the storyline and I feel that it could do much more with some editing and if you set the pace of the story. I can't get over Rihan's sweetness!😍 Keep writing, dear. I hope my review helps a little. Good luck!
P.S. I found it on wattpad too and couldn't stop myself from dropping comments!❣

Interesting beginning

As I've stated in the comment, the first chapter, which is the only chapter published so far, is really interesting and intriguing. I think that a blurb or a short description of the story would help the readers to get a better idea of the plot, though. But anyhow, im enjoying this. Good job!

Hooked right up from the beginning!

Wow! Only one chapter and I can't wait for this story to finish so I can binge read it from start to finish. I'm literally hooked with this story and in awe of your way with words. I love the way you've portrayed the protagonist...G201 (It's so weird when I call that name😂😂) Anyways, my point, I loved your story and CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE! GOOD JOB! Keep it up!

Intriguing

Wow! You've got a great concept here! I loved the thing about their headboards and their flying and stuff. Then the last symptom of the virus! My heart nearly jumped out at the mere imagination! You are such an amazing storyteller. Every setting is described so effortlessly and intricately. Just a thing I want to say: I feel like it would have been better to describe the characters along the flow instead of giving all the introductions at once. It somewhat creates a hassle going all the way up to visualize every new characters. But I see you've given some descriptions along the ride too, so that's okay. I see no any errors here and would really love to stick with this one till the end. Love your work!

Engaging read

Phew! I had so many distractions while reading this book and I've FINALLY come to the end of it. I really liked the way you've portrayed your characters. You've chosen their personalities quite well and it made the story really interesting. I couldn't sit still after I read the first few chapters and my hands were literally itching to read one more chapter. I also love the small bits of humor you've placed in the story which makes the readers more engaged. However, as you've mentioned English is not your first language, I could find quite a lot of grammar errors with this story. The major one being mixing up of tense. I noticed that there's mixture of past and present tense in the same paragraph which can be a little disturbing. Also, when you're inserting monologues, I saw that you inserted it in between her conversation with other characters, which was somewhat disturbed the flow. Maybe you can add the monologue after the dialogue. Or if you wish to add it in between, you might want to first differentiate it by inverted commas at the end of the conversation and add ot again when the conversation resumes. I spotted some other errors in spellings and such but nothing big enough. And considering English is not your first language, I must say, you've done a remarkable job. I like the plot of the story and the tension between Blaze and Phoebe is SO INTENSE! Overall, I love your work and will be looking forward for more updates! Good job!

A thrilling experience

So... I found out that it's a one-shots kind of thing. And this has to be the first one I've read here. But, I really enjoyed it. Each chapter has it's own uniqueness and your writing is so refined. Impeccable writing! The only thing I would have liked more is if the chapters were a bit longer as I found myself wanting to read more each story; the background, the aftermath and everything. But still, that might be what makes this book more interesting. Anyhow, I loved it!

Interesting

It's really interesting reading about Adam and Whit. I loved the way you put that little part of dialogue into the story description. It made me really curious to start your story. I feel like some sentences are a bit... like missing something in their structure and there were some grammar and punctuation errors I spotted. But those errors can be overlooked as the story has a good base. Overall, I loved it! Would be waiting for more chapters!

A good read

The story description you've written is just... amazing. I really loved your description. It's so captivating and intriguing. And the prologue nearly took breath away. I felt like watching an extreme thriller movie in the first few chapters. I found some grammar errors, mostly regarding present and past tense but other than that, it's a good read! Keep it up!

A truly remarkable work!

I feel like this story is the perfect example of what a fantasy should be like. The author has such an impressive way with words that I could literally imagine every single events as if i were watching a movie. The plot is great and had me hooked until the very last chapter. This is, without a doubt, very much worth reading.

Captivating

Okay, I'm in love with the way you write. Every sentence I read made me feel like I was right there with the characters. The sentences were very well formed and the plot was great, too. I couldn't find a flaw in your writing. Great work of fiction!

Bone chilling

There are only two chapters so far, so I can't really say much about it. But from these two chapters, I can say that the author is an amazing storyteller. Tje first chapter alone gave me chills and the second chapter got me creeps 😂😅. Anyways, I enjoyed the two chapters and would love to read more.💗❣

Sweet

It was a really short story... but it's just SO SWEET! I love Jeh and his swoon worthy words🥰🥰 I personally suggest you to maybe think about making a long story about Jeh and Tia, including their background, physical attributes, the environmental setting and everything. You can then include this work as an event in that story. It's because you have a good potential for something beyond these short stories with a single event. There are quite a lot of grammar errors. The first one o spotted was in the first chapter. You don't use past verb following 'didn't' like you've used in that sentence. You might want to use a present verb there. Others, there were some errors worth mixed past and present tense, sentence structuring and such.
All in all, I'd say you've done a good work and would love to see this turned into a long, beautiful story.
Best wishes! Keep writing! 🥰❣❣

Mysteriously captivating

Well I'm halfway up this book so far. But I'll definitely be going back to it as soon as I write the review. Starting from the things I loved about your book, I loved the plot, which is the most important thing in any story. It's quite unique and you've added a touch of mystery and adventure here that captivated me right from the start.

The writing style is good but I feel that it could do much better with some editing. I felt like some phrases could be said better than what you've written. Like, for example, it would sound better if you used 'told', 'answered', 'announced', 'commented' and such similar verbs instead of the verb 'said to' as used in multiple places.
Story wise, like the other readers have commented, I, too felt like there were some 'blank spaces' in the first few chapters. However, things started making sense as I reached further. I found some grammar errors regarding tense and sentence structuring and a few typos.
Another thing I want to add (forgive me if I'm coming out as too harsh but I just want to give an honest review) is maybe you might want to shiw the characters' emotions more openly. Personally, infect like there were a lot of dialogues between the characters but quite a few sentences indicating their internal thoughts and feelings. Those internal emotions can help the readers truly feel the characters and what they're going through.

Anyhow, I know that this story has a great potential with it's unique and intriguing storyline and captivating plot. So it's definitely a five star for me. I'm going to restart my reading from here and binge read it till finish. I hope my review helps!

Overall, kudos to the author! Keep writing! Best wishes!❣❣

Mysterious and alluring

This story nearly took my breath away! I LOVE your way of writing! It has this unique ability to capture the readers' attention and captivate them right to the end. I love the selection of characters and description of settings. The way you've introduced the new characters slowly and shown them connected to the others is absolutely incredible. Then there was the nightmare, the little things like growling, change in eye colors, unusual nightmares and others which are brought in so naturally! I found some grammar errors here and there, mostly typos and punctuation errors but other than that, I LOVE YOUR WORK! Would love to binge read this one! Good job, author! Keep writing! 👏👏🥰🥰

Interesting beginning

I really love the beginning! It's so captivating and now I just want to read more and more of it! The blurb alone has the ability to pull the readers right into your story and the first chapter published so far is equally enthralling. I'll be waiting for the next update! Good job!👏❣

Intensely swoonworthy

I've had a complete array of emotions while reading this. Every chapter was equally thrilling and left me wanting for more! I couldn't leave this until I reached the last chapter and still found myself disappointed in reaching the end! I can't wait to read more! LOVED this story!😍😍👏👏

Intense😍😅

Phew! That was intense. I really love the storyline here. It's a cliche bestfriend of ex kind but with a completely different twists and turns that has the readers intrigued. The selection of characters was very good and I really loved how Brandon is different from the stereotypical male protagonists. He's so sweet towards her that's it's SWOONWORTHY! I'm really loving your book. However, I spotted some grammar errors like in the form of mixed past and present tense in the same paragraph. I also suggest you to maybe italicize the letters when talking about the characters' internal thinking or monologues. That makes it more systematic, I think. And ther were a few missing punctuation marks such as commas, exclamation marks and such along with a few misspelled words. But that's understandable as you've mentioned English is not your first language. Anyways, I hope my review helps a little in that area. All in all, I LOVE YOUR WORK! Can't wait for more! Great job, author!😍👏

SO SO GOOD!

I'm hooked. Literally. As in can't-stop-reading kind of hooked. I absolutely loved each characters, from feisty Alexa to the level headed Reagon and even their friends! The story is just so sweet that I know I'll be sticking with this one till the very end. I'm actually only halfway through but that's because i found you on wattpad so I'll just re read from there so that I can comment on my favorite paragraphs which, there are lots of! Great job! LOVED IT!🥰🥰😍

I'm in love already!😍

Wow! I love this book, although you've only published two chapters so far! I love Spencer's witty, dry comebacks. I couldn't stop cracking up at her replies!🤣🤣 Your writing is just LOVELY! I found some errors, mostly regarding uppercase of first letters of the sentences. And some other errors regarding punctuation and stuffs. But those things apart, I LOVE YOUR STORY and can't wait for more! Good job!

A good read

All in all, I quite liked the story. The journey from strangers to something more is really sweet. You've chosen your characters well and I loved the way you've described the events in series. I'm just halfway to it now but wanted to leave a review so that I could continue reading again. And I'm sure I'm gonna love the upcoming chapters as well! However I found some grammar errors around the story and some statements that could have been made better. For example,near the end of the first chapter, instead of the phrase 'carrying me in his hands' I think it would've sounded better if you said 'in his arms'. Stuffs like such. But overlooking these minor details, I think that you've done a wonderful job and will be stocking up with this story till the end! Great work!

Good one

Alright. I haven't really read all the chapters published yet but I'm sure I'll catch up on that later on. Anyways, I just wanted to say that I loved your story! The plot is really good and I admire choice of characters here. However I spotted quite a lot of grammar errors like the use of past and present tense in the same paragraph. Like, you've used 'is' and 'was' in the same paragraph, talking about the same event. Another thing was, the use of the plural verb like 'have' with singular noun (Mona/Henry). So... these are some of the things I wanted to point out. Hope it helps! Anyhow I love your story and will be returning to it soon! Good job!

Things just got more interesting!

Okay, I just finished reading this on wattpad and I couldn't hold myself from commenting every now and then!😅 This is SO ADORABLE! Their childhood moments are incredibly sweet and as they've grown up, things have turned much much more intense! I kinda felt that the kids sounded too mature for 7 year olds so it was a little confusing at times. Personally speaking, I think you need to mostly show their activities instead of saying the things running in their heads as kids are usually impulsive rather than logical. Also I spotted a few grammar errors, tensewise but other than that, I love it! And now that they're older, I can't wait for more. I'll surely follow this story in wattpad!

The title is really deceiving

God! Only two chapters and this makes me want to stay away from children for good. I can't believe you named it little angel!😬😂😂 Anyways, about this book. What a chill you gave me! Phew! I still got goosebumps and that bone chilling sensation. I'm torn between wanting to read more and staying away from this to save my sanity. Very well written. You've given attention to every detail and the description was very vivid. Love your work! Would love to read more (if I get over the mental image of the gaping hole in his cheek😬😅)

So far so good

Okay, I absolutely love the plot of the story. I love the characters and description of settings. In fact, I love almost everything of the story. My only suggestion would be that you might want to distinctly indicate when the characters are having a monologue. Like, maybe use italics font to indicate it. It can make the readers a bit clearer. Also, there were some mix up of present and past tense so you might want to stick to one. Another thing is, I think you need to add punctuation marks at various places like commas, exclamation marks and such to make the story more interesting and give a clearer picture of the characters' tone of dialogues. Well, I hope this helps. I really loved your story and would be waiting for more! Good job!

Unique

Okay, So I still have some chapters left to read but from what I've read so far, I quite like the story and where it's going. The female protagonist is a strong, independent woman and her personality is really impressive. I like the plot of the story which is different from anything I've read before. The only suggestion I give you is maybe mention the change of POV when you're doing so. For example, in some of the chapters that you showed conversation among her brothers and Evan and his siblings, the girl wasn't present there but the characters were mentioned as 'my brother' and the change of POV wasn't indicated either, which I found slightly confusing and had to read it again for it to make sense. Also, I saw some grammar errors like mixing up of past and present tense but otherwise, I love your story and will definitely be sticking to the end of this one. Good job you've done here! I hope my review helps!

A lovely read

Wow! This story is so differ from anything I've read. I really loved the settings and the attention to detail you've done with this. The characters were described so well and by the end, I felt like I personally knew them somehow. Great work!

A unique storyline

Yeah, I found the story quite interesting. It has a unique storyline, different from all the other cliches from what I've read so far. For English being your second language, I must say that you've done a really good job with this one! I only found some grammar errors here and there and none was big enough to deter the storyline. Reading your words, I don't see a reason why you would even have a need to mention that English is not your primary language. You're doing really good! Keep it up!

Mesmerizing

OH MY GODDDDD! THIS STORY IS JUST SOOOOO GOOD! Phew! I still have some chapters left to read but I just can't help myself from posting a review first. I got goosebumps starting from the very beginning and I still have them. I just think it might do something to my heart with all the pounding it's been doing since the prologue. 😅 Anyways, hats off, author! I could give you more than five stars if I could. And I'm not even kidding! Keep it up!

SO SO GOOD!

AMAZING! You have such a wonderful way of writing that has me spellbound. I nearly cried my eyes out in the first couple of chapters. It was just so good! Absolutely, incredibly, wonderfully amazing story. I know I'm gonna stick with this one to the end. Great job author! Keep it up!

Mysterious beginning

Wow! I really loved the overall concept command plot of the story! More importantly, I loved the beginning. It was so well written! I could feel my heartbeat getting louder and goosebumps appearing as I read the chapters. It's only a few chapters published so far but I already hate Edith's parents more than I hate spiders (which I hate a lot). And I already admire Edith. My only suggestion would be to maybe break down your paragraphs as some of them were too long and looked quite bulky. Other than that, I absolutely love your story and can't wait to find out more about Edith's new journey from here!

Going with the flow

Well. Yeah. I love the story. The summary had me hooked. It seemed like a breath of fresh air from all the cliches like the dominating husband turns soft after marriage. And the chapters didn't disappoint me at all! I loved the prologue and every other chapters that follow. And I think James is quite sweet in his own way🥰😅 I spotted some minor errors, nothing big and would definitely love to read more!

An amazing roller coaster ride!

Phew! Your work is AMAZING! It was such a wonderful experience reading your work, absorbing every sentence. I literally hit goosebumps reading about the staff and that book thingy.😅 Every sentence, every detail is so well written and so intriguing. I absolutely loved it and can't wait for more!

Wow!

Just awesome! Your way with words, the plot of the story, description of characters and settings... well everything is perfect! This is gotta be the first LGBTQ story I read here but I must say, this is definitely the one I would've wanted to read for the first time! Each chapter had me on the edge and wanting for more! Absolutely amazing! Will be waiting for the next chapter and the next after that! Great job author!

Would love to binge read this one!

I loved the story description, the characters selection was quite different from the cliche powerful man and weak woman so it was a refreshing read. I really loved how the story is going and am torn between waiting for an update or binge reading it all at once. The only thing I'd like to suggest is that you might want to indicate whose POV you're writing on. As an ongoing story, it'll take a little time to figure out whose POV the readers are reading about when it's not specified. But other than that, I really, absolutely love your story already! Good job!

Refreshing

Well, the plot is quite unique and so refreshing! And the way you write, I could literally imagine those flowers and birds like you described so well. (Although by me imagining those, I'm just talking about some giant animals dressed in flowery outfit if that makes sense... I mean that's where my imagination is limited to😅😅😂) Anyways, jokes apart, I really enjoyed your story, the two chapters published so far and would be waiting for more. However, just a little suggestion: I personally think that it would be even better if you break down the paragraphs so that it doesn't look too bulky. Somebody had suggested me about that and now I see that it does make a difference. I mean it's so easy to read when you're met with smaller paragraphs and adequate spacing instead of bulky walls of text. But of course, that doesn't really deter my fascination with your story. It's really amazing! Keep it up!

Good one!

So....starting from the beginning, the summary is good and interesting. The beginning of the story is also quite good and it is capable of holding the reader's attention. However, I must say that there were quite a number of grammar errors which were slightly disturbing. Other than that, I think it's a good story and has a good potential. Keep it up!

So far, so good

Alright, I found the story quite sweet so far. It starts off pretty well and has a good description of characters. The summary is quite interesting as well. And there is adequate description of the environmental settings which I liked. However, there are some places that I think you might want to improve. Like, grammar and punctuation for instance. I saw that there were lowercase letters in the beginning of most of the sentences which I found a little disturbing as it was something I'm not used to. And I think the story needs a little work on present and past tense as they are mixed up at some places. But all in all, I'd say it's a really good story. I love the bits of humor in the story and think that it's going to be an interesting read once you overlook some of the errors. I hope this review helps a little! Keep up with your good work!

Intensively sweet!

I LOVE this book! And I mean that in a 'I'm-yelling-out-loud-and-I-don't-care' kind of way!😅 I love it's title that itself is intriguing. Then I love the summary which is even more alluring. Then the inside of the story... just loved it! It's a huge FIVE STARS for me! Good job, author!

Has potential with good editing

Well, the summary is intriguing. It makes the readers want to read more of the story. The plot is also quite good. But the problem comes with the really fast pace of the story. The story escalates very fast right after the beginning that made me quite confused. Also, there were lots of grammar errors that could be improved. And personally, I think a little more background description and description of the characters could do good with the story. I suggest setting the pace so that the story becomes more enjoyable instead of rushed like I felt while reading. But apart from these little errors, I'd say it does have a potential and could do really well with proper polishing.

Lovely beginning

It has such a sweet beginning!😍😍 I loved every sentence of it! The story outline seems sweet and there weren't any grammar errors I could find. I'm quite disappointed that only one chapter is published so far. I'll be waiting for the next chapter with bated breath. Literally 😅😍😍🥰

Absolutely intriguing

I absolutely loved the story! It was like watching a thriller movie with perfect mixture of adventure, action, fantasy and many more that I can't even list out. The summary alone got me captivated and the rest of the story was equally intriguing. Honestly speaking, I somewhat felt like the story was a little too straightforward, like the characters moved a little too fast and I personally feel that a little more background and characters' description could make it even more interesting but that might be the intent of the author. Anyhow, I really enjoyed the book and couldn't find a reason why it deserves any less than five stars!
P.S. I really loved the mysterious ending as well! Good job!

A good one

The thing I loved the most about your book is your selection of characters. The female protagonist is not some powerless, soft spoken nobody like you find in most of the stories. She's equally as powerful and strong as her mate and that makes the story more intriguing. I love the plot and couldn't find any significant grammar errors. All in all, I loved it!

Loved it!

Absolutely loved it. The beginning is the part that I loved the most. It pulls the readers right in. And the way the story unfolds has me falling even more in love with the story. I found some tiny bits of grammar errors but they're not that big to deter my love for the story though! I think it's really a good read.

Dangerous to my heart😅

Phew! 😅 Only two chapters and my heart is beating like crazy. The starting is absolutely intriguing and every sentence has the potential to give a bone chilling effect to the readers. The story telling is incredible. The way you've described the setting and the motion of the characters has me spellbound. It's definitely one I wouldn't mind waiting for the next update. Good job!

A fantastic fantasy!

I know, only four chapters are published so far. Well, five, if you count the first one I assume it the prologue. But let me tell you, even these few chapters are so good that I suddenly want to read the next one as fast as I can and at the same time wait for the whole book to be completed so that I could binge read it without torturing myself with the wait for a new chapter every now and then. The story actually got me goosebumps as I read about the transformation of Wren. And everything is just so... fantastic! I just can't wait for another chapter.

Bewitching😍

So, I love the beginning of the story. Even the synopsis and prologue had me captivated. The writing style is great from what I've read so far. I'm a bit disappointed that only three chapters are published so far. But yeah, it's definitely a five star for me and I know I'll be eagerly waiting for each update! Good job!

A good one, really

Well, I found the story quite good so far. The arrogant and possessive Italian and feisty Filipino make quite a couple with their constant disagreements. However, I thought the first few chapter were a bit like going on circles. Like she keeps on running and he chases her everytime but as the story progresses on, I must say I found it kinda sweet the way Massimo softens for her. There are some grammar errors that I noticed like in terms of tense and spellings but other than that, I love your story! I'll definitely be sticking up to it until the end!😊

Unique

So, even with few chapters, this book has me completely hooked. The story is not like any other I've read before and the author's way of writing was simple, yet captivating. Simply put, I love this book already and am desperately waiting for more chapters. It's definitely a five star for me. :)

Sweet

Okay, so I found the story quite sweet. I instantly fell in love with the big bad but adorable pouty Alexios and lovely, smart Ysabel. There were some incidents and conversations which were incredibly funny as well and those just made my day. However, I was left somewhat disappointed with the random turn of events such as their marriage and how things progressed afterward. And the end, I felt was a little dissatisfying. Or is it the end or are their more chapters to follow? Forgive me if there are more chapters remaining but if there are more ti come, I can't wait to read them. I felt there were some little errors in grammar but other than that, it's a really good story that has the perfect mixture of sweetness, darkness, mystery, romance and everything you would want in a romance story. I really enjoyed reading it and will be waiting if there are, indeed, other chapters coming along!

Intriguing

Simply intriguing. That's the only word I can think of. I read all chapters written so far in a single sitting and although I was a little confused for the first couple of chapters, I became more and more transfixed by the events as the story went in. It has a perfect mixture of adventure, uniqueness, mystery, thriller and I'm sure a sizzling romance is to come soon. Overall, it's been an interesting experience and I can't wait for the story to be completed!!! You've done a really good job, author!