Refreshing

"Well, the plot is quite unique and so refreshing! And the way you write, I could literally imagine those flowers and birds like you described so well. (Although by me imagining those, I'm just talking about some giant animals dressed in flowery outfit if that makes sense... I mean that's where my imagination is limited to😅😅😂) Anyways, jokes apart, I really enjoyed your story, the two chapters published so far and would be waiting for more. However, just a little suggestion: I personally think that it would be even better if you break down the paragraphs so that it doesn't look too bulky. Somebody had suggested me about that and now I see that it does make a difference. I mean it's so easy to read when you're met with smaller paragraphs and adequate spacing instead of bulky walls of text. But of course, that doesn't really deter my fascination with your story. It's really amazing! Keep it up! "