What is your opinion?
Pure
"I smiled from the beginning to end. It was refreshing."
To the one who writes for the Balrog Slayer
"Good job! It's a very nice story, and I enjoyed reading it. The way you write for the Elves makes them friendly, happy, and relatable. I like that. I also like the touch of humour you add with the "potions." I think that the first half of the story and the second half are slightly removed from each-other, in that one focuses on the arrival of Thranduil, while the second focuses on Legolas. Thranduil's arrival doesn't seem to me very important in this story, because he doesn't actually get there in the course of the plot. This makes the build-up to it rather useless. Your grammar is very good, aside from the fact that you want to work on capitalizing title names like "Elven lord" for example. I like the second half better. The ending is very nice. I also like how you use the kenning "Balrog-Slayer" for Glorfindel. Namarie, ~EverElven"
