What is your opinion?
His pet
"I really like this story 😍 and I can't wait for an update 😍 🤗, please update soon ❤ 🙏 "
Pet
"Nothing like vampires, being a vampire lover and writer I always like to see others try to write ones. IT's refreshing and inspiring. Now overall of the story, good story structure, except on chapter two felt the lines where a bit off. Second, I would advice for the first two chapters to be edited, but just the part where the POV names start. Too much space on it. Chapter three was better. Grammatical mistakes saw a few but it can be fix so I don't mind that much, I've seen worse. The story Dialogue well developed, like the fact that the FL is strong and fierce, hope this story develops into more and more twist and turns. Give that suspense. You already have a story where you portray what Vampires are and it's good. Keep up the good work!"
