Good one

"Alright. I haven't really read all the chapters published yet but I'm sure I'll catch up on that later on. Anyways, I just wanted to say that I loved your story! The plot is really good and I admire choice of characters here. However I spotted quite a lot of grammar errors like the use of past and present tense in the same paragraph. Like, you've used 'is' and 'was' in the same paragraph, talking about the same event. Another thing was, the use of the plural verb like 'have' with singular noun (Mona/Henry). So... these are some of the things I wanted to point out. Hope it helps! Anyhow I love your story and will be returning to it soon! Good job!"