Great first draft

"The story and plot are well thought out and easy to follow for the most part. It's an enjoyable book. A few mistakes here and there lead to some confusion but it's minor. Also there is some great attention to detail and the sprinkles of phrases/lines in a speakers natural language are a nice touch. There's a nice array of characters but not much detail on their motivations, though this is possibly intentional to keep the reader guessing as to who is on whose side. Just sometimes this kind of extra detail can be a nice touch. Occasionally entire phrases/sentences/paragraphs are repeated word-for-word close together which interrupts the flow of the work. In some instances unusual/incorrect words have been used to describe a situation. However, I am possibly being a little harsh on the writing/grammar side because I suspect English is not the author's first language. With a proof/beta reader I think most of these mistakes could easily be ironed out. I'm still not 100% certain if this book comes before or after Iron Mountain (I'm going to read that next) and will update this if some of the questions I have about the wider world are answered by reading that one first. However, this book still works well as a standalone. I'd recommend this book to anyone who likes fast paced action packed stories."