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ULTRA GREAT

"gooooooooooooooddd damn, I liked it.. keep it up"

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forbidden love

"it's so wrong, but it feel so right. deep and innocent love affair between marvin and amy. cannot wait for something wonderful that awaits for them in part two. thank you author for your amazing writing."

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Esperanza

"I would recommend this book for everyone to read . What an emotional roller coaster about forbidden love. The Author has written so beautifully and in depth about the love, emotions and pain that is hard for us not to flow with it. Can’t wait for the sequel. I literally finished this book a little more than 24 hours lol!!"

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Esperanza

"I managed to get to the end of chapter three, but for some reason, I really struggled to get into this book. The paragraphs and the chapters are really long, and there is a lot of telling the reader what happens, with hardly any dialogue. For example, I told them good morning, or I went to work. There isn't really any description. Also in the first chapter, you tell us a lot about the main characters, but it's almost as if you tell the readers too much, about their lives, and families and jobs and backgrounds. It's too much information, I find it is actually better, to drip-feed information to the reader, a small bit at a time otherwise it could be a bit too overwhelming. Keep up the hard work, Sofia"

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