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Cone back.

"Jumps around a bit. Enjoy the read"

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Zaphira's Flames

"Loved the book, though the question as to the traitor was didn't get answered. There were a few grammar errors, and the way conversations were written wasn't clear, but other than that, well written! Also, big thing... Flames doesn't have an apostrophe. If you love demons, vampires, and werewolves, you'll love this book! I know I did, it's definitely up there in my faves so far on Inkitt!!"

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Saphira

"Totally loved it. 😘❤️ Adventure and love and a happy ending ❤️ & ✝️🛐s for you author"

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Good story

"Really enjoyed the story except that it was really hard to tell who was saying what because you have entire conversations run together in paragraphs and not identified who is saying what. Grammar errors are mostly because of tenses, like They are is supposed to be They're There is a place They have is supposed to be They've Their is when referring to more than one person There were several other spelling errors but these were the main ones that were repeated through the book, which was otherwise a very good read! Will look forward to reading more of your work and hopefully you will correct these mistakes."

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Zaphira's flame

"Great book really enjoyed it live the whole extended family and really hope there will be more books in the future. Few words misspelled and added when not needed. Needs an edit, but does not distarct from good read. Well done "

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Sap horas Flame

"Over all a pleasant read. Decent plot twists with a lot packed into the story. Minor spelling issues, looks like a spell check confusion. "

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"This is a good book "

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