What is your opinion?
Twisted Fairytale
"Quite an excellent twist on Hansel and Gretel. The backstory and the idea of two hungry witches was quite interesting."
The Forgotten Dream
"Engaging right from the start. The Forgotten Dream lures you in with questions that'll left you wondering. Well-rounded plot, interesting mix of characters and philosophical allegories to real world problems (e.g. starvation, social inequality, survival and morality dilemmas etc). The author knows the way around historical periods in Europe esp the 1300s, added with fairytale-inspired themes. As for the story structure, dialogs are written differently and condensed sometimes to one paragraph. There are some punctuations missing occasionally but it didn't put me off from your narrative. I always make it to a point to motivate writers of their craft, because who knows? Someday, we'll get to see this story in paperbacks or hardcovers. So, what I can only advise for now is to keep writing. I'm looking forward to where will you take this story next! ;)"
Excelente story, scary, drama, love, etc.
"Yo recomiendo este libro a todos, es muy interesante. Me gusta por que es scary. Es fácil de entender, y cuando lo lees es como si lo estuvieras viviendo. Como si la historia fuera real y tu esta dentro de ella."
Very creative!
"I am really enjoying this story so far. The characters are really interesting and complex which really draws one in. I'm really looking forward to seeing what happens next"
True book
"I read some of the previous versions of this marvelous story, and with a calm heart I can say that this version is the best one, and the whole story is better than some AAA films and books. The mix of great imagination, knowledge, and years of editing has really made it reach its peak, yet there is still a way to go up with more chapters. The style can be sometimes confusing, but I didn't find any wrongly written paragraphs or big plot holes. I can't tell if the English is good, but the structure of sentences seems fine. I am definitely looking forward to more chapters"
I like it
"This chapter really peaked my interest surprisingly because my main interest is thriller and fantasy, my only dislike was the dialogue between the mother and the four year old,although i t looks to me like you wrote it like that on purpose, to someone else it may seem to be spelling errors that's the only change I would recommend,everything else was great tho"
