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Love Forged in Frozen Wilderness
"Set against frigid Alaskan backcountry, this complete survival romance delivers sincere, down-to-earth emotions without empty melodrama. Stranded after a plane crash, Amelia and Caleb grow close gradually while battling harsh weather, hunting for food and tending each other’s wounds inside a remote cabin. They open up about respective past losses and fall in genuine love during their isolated winter. Unexpected rescue rips their peaceful routine apart. Back to civilization, Amelia ends ties with her former partner Dale upon learning her pregnancy, yet her delayed message leaves Caleb devastated to wreck his cabin possessions out of heartbreak. Raw sorrow and lingering affection run through the whole story, making their hard-earned happy ending convincing and satisfying."
Typos
"I noticed a couple of words that could be edited."
Muy buena
"Tiene de todo la historia y está muy bien narrada."
Feel good novel. Inf
"Very good novel i have read in the recent times. Writing is complete without any mistakes or errors. Ready to publish. Thank you for sharing it here for us to read for free"
In the cold
"It was a very nice novel the writer did well kudos to the writer I love it so very much "
Cozy romance 😍
"This story was so sweet! I usually dislike the (spoiler) pregnancy trope, but this was written really well and I loved how this ended. It did feel a teeny bit rushed at the end, but the epilogue smoothed it out really well. Overall its a really cozy romance and is written beautifully :)"
Dang girl... that was one hell of a ride. Lol
"Although there were a few comments I did not appreciate, like how the ml is comented to be the "ideal man." He's not. Far from it, actually. To me anyway. Spoiler ahead.... I find his anger after she leaves a bit concerning... as it connects to him, not actually getting help for his abandonment issues. Her leaving the way she did was crazy... like she told this man she loved him but picked someone else to his face.... totally get his crash out that would be me if I were him. Lol. Overall, I did really like it. Not too short, not too long. Good plot. Good Grammer. Good writing. "
Kashmiri bhai
"Akash Giri Bhai"
Half through
"I'm not sure if I like the main character, but we will see."
Each paragraph is very unpredictable
"Each paragraph very unpredictable"
Into The Cold
"This is a well-designed, thoughtful, intriguing story about how quickly life can change, how you never know what fate has in store for you. I loved all the characters, and the ending was perfect!"
Amazing book, I was thrilled to have read this book
"Amazing book I’m glad I picked this book to read "
Healthy plot, the writer seems to be a very good natured man.
"I have no dislikes of him, the author."
Can I get an opportunity?
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Great book position 👍
"I thought I was too old for a story like this but I was wrong. I really recommend it, especially for autumn evenings. 👍"
Owego done!
"Lovely story that’s well written and definitely worth a read! "
Good story. Mechanics need work.
"This review applies only to Chapter 1, as I have not yet read the other chapters; though I intend to when I can. I will rewrite this review with each new chapter. Overall, I think it's a good first chapter. I felt for Amelia as I read through the story, and I find myself rooting for her survival. There's a small list of writing mechanics and realism... I'm going to use the word 'quirks' that I noted as I read. But my biggest disappointment in the character is that she didn't even try yelling for Billy. Didn't even seem to think of her lost friend. At least, I assume they knew each other, because of how they were speaking on the plane. What I write below this statement, I write in the spirit of friendly critique. Please don't think I'm being harsh or 'mean.' Note on mechaics: "Stuff," interjection of action, "more stuff." I used to interject action into dialogue like this, but in my college English course, this was... I'm going to say it was 'discouraged.' Since then, I've found a better way to do this. Here's an example, borrowing from your own words: "I'm sorry ma'am!" He glanced over at her, eyes so dialated they looked more black than any other color. "Looks like we're going down." I love how you mentioned the dialation, as that is a clear sign of terror, showing a perceptive reader without actually naming the emotion. Good job! --------------------- "Brace yourself," he yelled, the muscles on his arms taut under the strain of trying to keep the plane in the air. "And if you believe in God," he added, "pray for us!" Two things jump out at me from this short passage: 1) If she can see that his arm muscles are taut, this implies to me he is atypically wearing light clothing, while flying in Alaska. I had assumed, from previous in the text, that he would be wearing a parka or heavy coat, even if he's in the cabin of his own plane. I would advise, instead of saying his arms were taut, to describe strain in his voice as he pulls hard at the controls. 2) This can be streamlined for a much more effective paragraph. I rarely see print books split dialogue from the same speaker between line breaks, especially if it's two short sentences. Here's a variation on it I think you'd find in a book published by TOR: "Brace yourself!" His voice growled with effort as he shouted, and pulled back hard on the flight stick, working to force the plane to stay aloft. "And if you believe in God, pray for us!" ---------------------- With each jolt, she prayed her end would be swift. 9/10 writing coaches agree, "that" is a filler word, and to be avoided. Also, adverbs are to be kept down when not necessary. If it ends in "ly," you probably want to change the sentence to avoid using it. Not all the time, mind; but as often as you can. ---------------------- When your PoV is knocked unconscious, anything that happens while they're knocked out is telling. A more impactful and suspensful story can be told if you have the character figure out what happened when they come to. Give them, and the reader hints. Lead them to discovery. "On the next impact, something hit her head-" or "On the next impact, her head hit something-" A lead-in like that. Followed by something along the lines of "-and everything went black. The next thing she knew" and continue from there. Flight seats are generally pretty hard to destroy, at least without killing the unfortunate person sitting in them. I'd advise losing the "what was left of it." ----------------------- "Something was wrong." is a redundant sentence. She was just in a plane crash. Readers would be more surprised if nothing was wrong. Just saying. :) ----------------------- "Perceiving nothing but whiteness in every direction..." Is she in a blizzard? Can she not see trees? Sheer cliff walls to which snow does not cling? the burning wreckage of the plane, and the smoke therefrom? Should she not look for Billy?"
Heart warming and delicious little story
"I loved the characters, plot development and details. It was very satisfying to read. It was also very well written."
Love by chance
"The plot is intriguing, realistic life to survive in the wilderness; thoroughly researched about trapping, skinning wild animals etc"
Moonman
"Kind of glad this was my first book on this app, love the adventure and the character building. Keep up the good work."
