A Simple Story

"Hello! I saw your post in the group and decided to check your stories. Since I am familiar with Alice Academy and this story is short enough that I can read it in ten minutes, I decided to leave a review here. Well, the story itself is so simple yet so real (in the Alice Academy-world). I could imagine them really doing this kind of stupid games, lol. Your description about the class is good enough, but there're some things that bugged me while reading this. First, I think you shouldn't have written the word 'stupid' and 'baka' together, since 'baka' also means 'stupid'. The 'P' in 'Pocky' should be written in capital, too. Well, I didn't check for further grammar errors.. I hope it helps somehow. Regards, Kei Angelus"