What is your opinion?
Good
"I like the plot but then that's it. Please don't take this in a discouraging way. Your story has potential but you need to do some alterations. It feels like there is no emotion in your story. When you read a story you should feel what the characters are feeling and that is missing here. I wish you could put more emotions in your writing. Then it's a bit rushed and it's too hard to continue reading. It makes the reader to give up on reading your story. Try to form more words around your thinking and put some emotions in it and that's it... Your story will be perfect. As for the grammatical errors you can use apps like grammarly. I think your story has a better chance once you rewrite it. All the best for your story. 🙂"
Reviewed till chapter 4
"The first impression of the book is a fair but not good enough, the reason behind the lack of reader's engagement .Book cover doesn't attracts as much attention as it should. Maybe because of the lack of a hint about the story like a short blurb or something like that. Still, the book was worth a shot. The plot was the one thing that grabbed my attention. It flows in a nice way that is neither way to leggy or too quick to keep up with. The character building skills are awesome and they make the sentiments so real. Author has a unique writing style which doesn't bore you instead it keeps you hooked. We found some technical mistakes in chapter 3 and 4 mostly about punctuation. You do have a good grip over grammar. We suggest you to go through those chapters again. Lastly, it was a nice book and we really loved it."
