What is your opinion?
Interesting
"(This review is based on a reading of the first six parts) The plot is extremely interesting. It leaves us with enough at the end of each chapter to satisfy us but there's also an overarching mystery to it all that is peeled off bit by bit masterfully. The characters are well-rounded. The dialogue is meaningful and also contains crucial information to the story. The chapters are short as well which makes for a great reading. Would highly recommend it to anyone looking for a gore-filled mystery with an interesting plot. "
Asylum
"Ok I loved the mystery and suspense your giving off in your first introduction. I thought was terrifying the description of the brutal murder of the guard, but it kept me intrigued to find out who did it. Your descriptions gave little away making me want to see how our main character is going to handle them when she talks to each of them! I’m really enjoying this story so far, since I myself wrote a murder mystery I do love a good horror book every once and a while. I do hope you continue with this book, because I am very intrigued so far. Great job author!🤩😁"
Excellent
"Excellent description, really gripping and not too much is given away. The opening was even better so much mystery and it really keeps the reader interested. The style the first couple of chapters being in letters is cool. Your paragraphs are a good size and your punctuation and grammar are excellent. In the chapter called The asylum the semi-colon ’a couple of reasons’ would be better as a full stop though. The bit when the Doc speaks saying ’So, can I ask’ then you put ’Brooks glances at me, brow raised high as he waits for me to continue’ followed by more speech from the Doc would be better as one paragraph I feel. The story does move at a good pace, your detail on your description is brilliant and your chapter sizes are good too. When all hell broke loose I felt tense for the characters, I couldn't stop reading! This story is dramatic, intense and a good read for those who love asylum horror."
Good so far
"I thought that it was really great even though I am not a fan of horror. I hope you keep writing because you are doing great so far. Can’t wait for an update."
