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Title's a little misleading

"When I decided to check out this story judging from the title that actually made me laugh, I was expecting something pretty different. The humorous title implies a humorous story, but that's not quite what I got. Maybe that's the beauty of it, that I had no way of seeing this story coming so, as it got more intense, I was caught off guard. No grammar errors in sight (if there is, I couldn't catch them so I guess it doesn't really matter), so well done. This brief story really gets a reaction out of you, just not the one I would have figured. Nice job!"

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