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One's Evening Nightmare

"I loved the plot of the story, it was really interesting. It has a smooth flow to it, and the writing style was very good. It was a great story!"

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Very Nice Read

"From the first sentence of the story, I was all in. The attention to detail made it easy to visualize the story as if I was really participating. Aside from some punctuation/grammar issues here and there, I loved the vocabulary. I would definitely read this series again while waiting for another update."

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Amazing Idea!!

"I love the way you give the details in your story and the idea of this story was very unique and interesting....I enjoyed reading it. But I was expecting more chapters."

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This is a unique idea!

"There are some grammatical errors, but those can be corrected with proofreading and a grammar/spell check site such as grammarly or an equivalent. I LOVE this idea that you have about writing dreams as stories. I've never seen anything like it on any of the writing apps and sites that I use. Your use of detail is excellent as well and really paints a picture for the reader while still allowing them to use their imagination. Excellent job, I hope you add more stories in the future."

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Short and sweet, with signs of promise.

"Ms. Quinne does a great job of painting a picture. The only problem is it was short and wanting more. There is promise to her writing and story telling."

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I liked it

"I loved how you added so many details it makes it enjoyable to read! "

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