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Compelling!

"I for one, love dark and gruesome poetry. I'm a fan of Edgar Allen Poe so this reminds me a lot of his poems and stories like The Raven and House of Usher. I think it flows really well and I the cliffhanger at the last chapter just wants me wanting and more!"

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Wonderful

"Wow this is so amazing! I love poems and these are so good! I love poems that are like this that have dark ones! This is a one hundred percent excellent!💯"

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Amazing!

"The first short story was dark and interesting. Who knew so much could be said in just a few paragraphs? I could feel the emotion throughout the entire thing, especially when he said "For love" and you talk about him walking away."

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