What is your opinion?
Good lesson
"I really enjoyed this, for the style that you were trying to achieve in an Aesop's fable you did great and as with all there was an important lesson to learn at the end. I think I would've liked to see a little more Zodiac influence in there, at times I forgot that the ram and scorpion had a more particular reason for being the characters. Apart from that though I thought the rest was great, it was a nice story with a good meaning."
Very cute
"Aw, i think this is a very cute story. Personally, I always felt as thought Aries natives would have a better- if not the best- chance with a Leo. A Sagittarius second to that. Scorpio and Aries pairing sounds really strange and messy to me. Anyways, I didn't find anything wrong with this piece. I enjoyed the light feeling behind it, the concept (I'm a HUGE fan of the Zodiac), and especially the ending. Punctuation was great and the flow was easy to follow. Very nice work on this!"
