What is your opinion?
Nice i love the storyline so much
"The both protagonist "
It's awesome
"I love your story line and I really appreciate your imagination and creativity. Keep writing and dnt stop by listening or reading negative comments "
Keep it up 🙂
"It's a very good and loving novel 🙂 but if you use punctuation and quotation then that will be great and take it slow ie. If you describe things then it help in imagination 🧠 .... I read your story and don't make paragraph because they don't give you "FEELING" you need while reading romantic novels 😃 and for maintaining people interest you need to "GIVE DETAILS"☺️☺️ .. Keep continue 📝 and God Bless You 😇"
It's very nice story keep writing .
"I love your creativity. Its very interesting keep writing just take care of some grammatical errors other than that your storylines and everything Is awesome I love it "
It's just amazing di... Love you
"I liked your concepts.. And I enjoyed alot... Wishing you for your future 😇love you dii❤❤❤"
Awesome story line I'm in love with story
"I love your story . Everything is awesome in your story . your story lines are very nice I love it and it's very interesting story but the thing is there are some grammatic mistakes and some errors . Just improve it other than that everything is awesome. Keep writing and keep sharing your stories with us."
good storyline
"okay so it could use a lot of editing in grammar and spelling errors. just, check over that. but other than that your story line is very interesting and it’s a great start! keep up the good work i can see you doing well!! "
I never have interest in this all bt this story is good
" 👍Keep going & write more & more interesting story's "
Keep Writing
"I like the storyline, and would love to see where it leads. Unfortunately, I think your grammar and punctuation skills need a lot of work. You need to separate the dialogue with speech marks and make clear who is speaking. This story could go a long way if you fix these aspects, otherwise it will be unappealing for readers to continue reading. I hope this doesn't discourage you and you keep writing. If you ever need a helping hand, ask me! I shall reply and help whenever I can."
Nice story but needs improvement in grammar
"Love the storyline though the grammar and spacing need work. Also use of punctuations is necessary. I love your idea of using Indian names like Raj. Also make sure that you use paragraphing and leave space so the readers don’t get confused."
