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AWESOME
"Super good so far! I love all the information you've given on the characters, and I especially loved the information you gave about the characters from another characters point of view. That was confusing, but I hope you get what I'm trying to say. I'd like to mention how great it is that you've introduced a subplot this early on. I'm interested in Oshana and Haffalgar's love story, but I also really want to see Trynick heal and how he's going to deal with the loss of Nadia. All in all, I'm excited to see where the story is going to go!!"
The Diaries of the Salient
"I think the story is very captivating. I can't wait to read the rest."
