The Lone Wildflower

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Super Interesting

Your novel is soooooo interesting. It had me hooked from the start. Your character development and writing style really add to the futuristic narrative of your story. I look forward to reading more of your work!

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I'd Give It Six Stars if I Could

My God. That was a really good read. The story is written so well, with a strong female lead and...Blaze. This hard-core romance will have anyone hooked from the start. I don't know if I've ever called a story sexy, but that's the best way to describe Fatal Infatuation. The writing paints your characters in such a realistic and human way that I feel like they're real people. I mean, you've done such an amazing job and I'm excited to read more of your work!

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Nice Job

Wow! I love the characters you've created. The story has a depth that I wasn't really expecting bit I'm here for it! It's written really well, and you've done a great job!

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AWESOME

Super good so far! I love all the information you've given on the characters, and I especially loved the information you gave about the characters from another characters point of view. That was confusing, but I hope you get what I'm trying to say. I'd like to mention how great it is that you've introduced a subplot this early on. I'm interested in Oshana and Haffalgar's love story, but I also really want to see Trynick heal and how he's going to deal with the loss of Nadia. All in all, I'm excited to see where the story is going to go!!

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I Like Where this is Going

The plot of the story is super relatable! I feel like maybe you need to work on showing and not telling. The first chapter, although very informative, is a bombardment of information that doesn't really need to be shared. I like how descriptive you are, but use that word power to capture your character's emotions and surroundings. Overall, I think your story has great potential and I'm excited to see what you'll do with it!

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Captivating

You've got my attention! With each chapter of my story, I found myself wanting to know more about Salem's past and about everyone's obsession with her. Your writing style portrays her in a very realistic way. I've read a lot of stories where the protagonist has a "past", and sometimes the narrative gets old, but this is not the case with your story at all! I look forward to more updates!

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Wow!

This was AMAZING! I almost wish it were more than a short story. I'm impressed that you've managed to explain the AI world you've created, develop AXIS, and end the Creator in one single chapter without it feeling overbearing. I also feel that I have to mention how I loved your explanation of life. It's a small part of the story, I know, but it made my question my own existence. Everything that AXIS was feeling and discovering was written so well - I knew what you were talking about before you even said it! Nice job!

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Unexpected and AMAZING

I'm hooked on this story! I love the emotional depth you created and how you didn't jump straight into the romance- it shows you took time and were intentional with your characters. I have to say, this is different from anything I've read before, but I can't wait for the rest of it!

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Love It!!

The first thing I want to say is that I love how well informed you are on your subject. The whole psychoanalysis subplot was really interesting, and it made your story feel much more real. Secondly, you're writing style is awesome. The way you created Jenny and wrote from her perspective really is a testament to your skills as a writer. And lastly, I love how you took a classic story and made it brand new. I can't wait to see mor works from you!

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Nice Job

This story is completely different than I expected it to be! Which is a really good thing, by the way. I love how you introduce the story to make it seem simple and domestic but add the fantasy element of elves and magic to wow your readers. The narration style is really interesting, because you went from Simon to Helen to William to David. I really like that! All in all, your novel is a great read and I look forward to more! :)

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Really Interesting!

I love this powerful, badass character you've created! The narrative style is really interesting, and I appreciate how you give insight to both characters thoughts. I'm excited to see where the story will go!

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Can't Wait for More

Wow! This story is so captivating! You've somehow managed to take a cliche plot and make it feel like something brand new! I love the narrative style, and the characters You've created really speak for themselves. O look forward to reading more of your work!

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Absolutely LOVED IT!

Your writing style is amazing - I especially love how descriptive you are. The scenes you portray are excellent as well. I loon forward to reading further installments!

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