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The alphas obsession

"Muy buena presentacion del trama. Te mantiene en suspenso hasta casi el final. Gracias "

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One of the best story I have read it was short and to the point. I love it!

"It was really good the romance parts were alive and well.i would recommend to friends and family good job witter! "

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Good short story

"The story is short but it makes it good because things aren't drug out. I look forward to the next book you sre writing."

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Beautiful

"Really loved the story.. it was nice for Jenna to accept Kade and their love"

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The alphas obssession

"Hope you can could write more stories because i love this novel.. Can wait to read a new one from you... Thank you Jennifer.. Take care and siya safr"

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U never know who u are destined with

"Loved it. Sweet. These tough Aphas always melt when in love. We have power as women😜"

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The Alpha's obsession

"Sooooooooooooo goooood! Thank you! "

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The alpha, s obsession

"At last a story finally with a good plot with it I read a lot and hate it when you get a book with just sex sex sex and no story plot Well done to the author "

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Amazing

"Beautifully written."

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Amazing job

"I loved your story so much. Keep writing "

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The alpha’s obsession

"Hey. Great story. I really like how you started it. However, I feel the story is rushed. Maybe adding details would help with the pace but still it didn’t stop me from enjoying. And grammatical errors which can easily be fixed :) Looking forward to the next chapter 💕"

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Forgot

"I get the plot or idea of the story. Many mistakes, too many showers going on. I didnt like when you used the term "fuck" rather then make love. Fuck is when there's no love involved."

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Kade and jenna forever

"Short and sweet.....thank you for writing this 🤗"

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Good

"Needs a little beefing up but the plot was good. Flush out the character a bit more. Very promising! "

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Good

"It was good but I didn’t expect the ending "

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My thoughts

"This story was nice but lacking. There are gaps. Disconnections. Lack of flow. It was lovely to read in spite of thank you for sharing."

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