Kizzy

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🤩😌

Hey!!!!
What a start ❤️. I really like the plot and construction of your story!!!! And the sarcasm is like the cherry on the top. However, there are few grammatical mistake, which can easily be fixed :) !
Great work 💕💕. I can’t wait for the next chapter

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ALPHA’S LOVE

Hey, great start. I really like the plot and construction of the story :). However, there are few grammatical mistakes but it can easily be fixed. Gonna keep reading it ❤️

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Nice!!!

Hey. Let me start by saying, good start. I really like the plot of the story so far. The bad boy vibes 🌟 I’m looking forward to the next chapter. However, there are few grammatical errors, which can easily be fixed! And a little heads up with who’s point of view is being discussed would be great. Cause it’s keeps switching and it’s kinda hard to get! But overall I like it ❤️

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Great !!!!!!

You did An amazing job!!!!!! I really like how the story started with a background and kept on developing. The touch of emotions and lust were cherry on the top ❤️. I can’t wait for the next chapter :)

Little tip, you can add at the top, who’s point of view you are giving ‘cause it kinda becomes difficult to know who’s point of view is going on as it frequently keeps on switching!

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The alpha’s obsession

Hey. Great story. I really like how you started it. However, I feel the story is rushed. Maybe adding details would help with the pace but still it didn’t stop me from enjoying. And grammatical errors which can easily be fixed :) Looking forward to the next chapter 💕

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💕✨✨

Hey!!!
Good start ❤️ I really like the plot of the story, how you have shaped it throughout the chapters. However, there are grammatical errors which can easily be fixed:) would love to help you ! Cant wait for the next chapter

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Archangle

Hey! So let me start by saying great start!!!
Your summary is really Catchy ❤️. I really like the plot; how you have managed the intense chemistry between the girl & mysterious guy and at the same time also giving a suspense angle to it 🤩🤩✨

However, I would have really liked if you would have added background details in the beginning chapter. Also a few grammatical errors but which can easily be fixed :) !!

But nothing stopped me from enjoying the story. Looking forward to the next chapter 💕

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Great !!!

Hey. Your story has a great start. I really like how you have given the background and smoothly connected it with the present time. However, I would have really liked to know the reason behind moving from place to another :)

Next the plot, really good one❤️. The construction of the plot is really good. You have started off by giving the information but at the same time keeping certain things in suspense, which really does the catch. But I feel the story is going really fast.

The emotional part, the Grandma’s and main character’s relation really does the charm of emotional connection. I could really feel the emotional connection!

I’m all in for this. Looking forward to the next chapter!!! ✨💕

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GREAT !!!!

Okay let me start by saying great plot!
I like how you have sustained the sarcasm and high level chemistry between the characters throughout. 🌟
I know I have mentioned this already but the chemistry and tension between the characters is amazing ❤️
However, I think maybe the words aren’t clear at times, ‘cause of which I wasn’t really able to catch what you were trying to convey. But it can easily be fixed :)
Overall I loved it. Gonna Keep reading it 💕

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I’m always with you

Hi, am always willing to write a review for a fellow author🌟. Plot of the story is great. I really like how you have started the story with a twist of a past and connecting it with her present. ❤️

There are grammatically error but which can easily be corrected. Just do a proof reading once and the story lacks details, it’s going on too fast. Maybe try adding a few details to it :). But good work 🌟❤️

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ONCE HUNGRY, TWICE BITTEN

Hi, always willing to write a review for a fellow author. Plot of the story is great ✨. I like how you have expressed the little details and emotions deeply. However, I would’ve loved it if the pace was little fast. I think it’s going on really slow (Personally I like fast paced story :)! ) but overall I really liked it ❤️
Will continue to read it ☀️

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Amaris

OMG. This book❤️
Let me start by saying great start. The suspense in the first chapter really does the work.
In the following chapters, all the emotions and steamy hot stuff just really kicks in.
I can’t wait for the other chapters.
Good job 💕

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