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imunne

"im so ingrossed"

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Immune

"I loved this book. Looking forward to more"

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BloodyHound & Human

"Love the story,up to now (cannot wait to read more of this fantasy story. "

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I need more!!!

"This story is so well written and interesting not to mention the sexy bits. I love Madeline and Emerick's relationship and how they can't keep their hand off each other even though they're literally in danger most of the time. I can't wait to read more, hopefully it's updated soon. Keep up the good work "

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Immune

"Immune is one of the best alien stories I've read, Sweet, sad, funny, sexy. Keeps you guessing. Can't wait for more of part 2!!!"

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Cant wait till next update..

"This is simply the best.. I’m a sucker for love triangles and usually get second lead syndrome but I really like emerick.. The alpha tho ( I’d need more info on him ahaha)"

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Immune

"Love this book can’t wait to see what’s next "

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SO GOOD!!!

"So good!!! This concept is amazing! I love the idea behind this story. It's an original idea and you do a wonderful job of bringing it to life realistically in my mind. The imagery, the language, the concepts... It's all so good! I would read sequels to this! I need to know more! But also... What. THE FUCK, dude. Firstly, that was a dick place to end the story at -- RIGHT BEFORE the hot, steamy, sexy stuff you'd been building to since chapter 5??! Are you KIDDING me?! Talk about cock blocking and giving me blue balls, ugh! (I am laughing while writing this, I'm not actually mad). Secondly, are you fucking with the readers on purpose? Your use of grammar and descriptive writing indicates to me that you are well educated and versed in creative writing. So, why THE HELL do you keep using "fastly" instead of "quickly?!?!!!" That was driving me BATTY! All throughout the book, this was the biggest and almost the only grammatical error I saw (minus some awkward phrasing or wording here and there). You used it SO MUCH too, "she fastly did this, she fastly did that," on and on. And you used "fastly" every. Single. Time. Instead of "quickly." I swear that you're fucking with the reader on purpose by doing that. Overall, this is an amazing and thrilling read. You did a wonderful job of capturing human nature, the likely reactions of a human girl in her situation, and brought to life the concept of humanoid alien creatures from other planets in a realistic manner. I don't find a lot of reads like this on Inkitt, and I hope to read more of your work!"

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Immune

"This book definitely keeps you on your toes. I’m a little confused, has this book been ongoing since June 2021?"

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Good story

"This is a good book different from what I usually read The story line takes a bit to grasp but think I will enjoy reading the rest off it still an open verdict Just have to wait until the end to find out"

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Always worth the wait

"One of my favourites on this platform "

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Immune

"Good storyline, very well developed characters, just a little spelling/grammer errors, the setting is original and not over done, over the book is great!"

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I like all of it. Good storyline. Creative.

"Thanks for all of your hard work Good read. Will recommend to all my reader friends. "

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Immune

"I'm hooked on this story"

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Immune

"I'm truly in love with this story. It's so unpredictable, intense, heartbreaking and full of passion. I'm rooting for Emerick all the way but I'm curious about Elias. Great writing and a fabulous plot. Please finish the story! 💕"

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Good

"I wanted to try something new. Not read many like this one. I'm liking it so far"

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Love it

"I love this story! #IamteamEmerick"

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Love it!

"Love this book!!"

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Immune

"Oh wow been impatiently watching and waiting for the next chapter what a plot twist! I have soooooo many questions. Love the story line characters blmn everything. Can't wait for more"

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Great so far!

"Great so far! "

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