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What is your opinion?

She is mine

"I love the story, the story is very confusing, I don't know who to dislike and like between vash and Raj"

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Obsessed

"Lovely plz update"

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His dark obsession

"I love this book I am so obsessed 😍😍😍😍"

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It's amazing...

"This book is sooo good to read...tbh I'm really obsessed with this book...there's lot of plot twist in the story and it's very thrilling too.. eventhough the punctuation and grammar is not very convincing, overall the story is the best..you can always try to improve it..don't give up author..☺❤"

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I love it

"I can't wait to read more in the future. "

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The Dark Side of Obsession

"The chapters are really captivating and intriguing 🦋💞 Overall, it was an awesome read ❤️🧡💛💛🧡❤️ -Kookie 🍪💕"

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Obsession

"Most stories I've read romanticize toxic and unhealthy relationships. This novel, however, sheds light on the issues of such things, specifically the obsessive love disorder or OLD. This made the novel unique, realistic and had the reader on the edge of their seats. The plot of the story is great so far and I'm enjoying the authors writing style. I adore how distinct and realistic the characters are as well as the descriptions. As for the technical writing skills, the chapters have yet to be edited, so I'll edit my review when the novel is finished. Overall, great story, I love the idea and concept and I can't wait to see where it goes. Great job!! ❤"

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Capturing

"It’s a very capturing story on quite a different and fresh topic 🥰"

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Great story can't wait to read more.

"The story is right on point. "

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Possessive

"I love the story so far. It will keep u on edge the whole time. I am really eager to read more. "

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Nice story

"Overall nice job. Like the way you've included everyone's pov but your grammer could be better and different use of a particular words here and there nothing major. Nice concept and writing 😊"

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The dark side of obsession

"Love de how the story is developing. Can't wait for the update♥️"

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Unique

"This is the first time I read a story that tackles this subject. The uniqueness of the topic and the way you wrote it made me keep reading. I'll be waiting for your next chapter. The grammar and ponctuation also sentences' structure need a throughout editing. I know you are aware of that. I wanted to stress on this subject because it can make your reader put your book down and never look at it again. Your book deserves better and the message it delivers deserves to reach far. Good job and good luck with your writing! For any reader out there, give this book a chance. It will be worth your time."

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Well I'll have to finish reading the book before I can suggest a title

"So far it's great!"

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Dark obsession

"It is a good plot but there is improvement needed in writing style and grammar ! "

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