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What is your opinion?
what do you think the color yellow tastes like
"i cant decide if it would be sweet or salty"
Good Read
"This story has so much potential. So far it's an eye-catcher. I think once the writer goes back and flesh out the book it will flow so much better. Other than that I would recommend it."
Needs polishing and general work.
"I can find and sense a lot of writing mistakes such as punctuation and grammar. You should work on improving word choice and writing, add in transition words and lengthen your sentences with detail. You should also identify the overall plot and characters, but hey, you do you! I like the story itself so far, just be sure to work and tinker out those writing errors!"
