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D'awwww!

"Hi there! Aw, this was so cute! You could clean up some sentences after the dialogue, as they're a bit overdrawn with details, but they're still really good! Just when I thought I knew what was coming, Hope turned out to be a boy! It kept me laughing and smiling. Great job and keep it up!"

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