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Wray's Angel - It's the Cheese
"Cheerful Chemist has written an amusing story with a funny twist. Also, one of the best lines about cheese ever. I can hear the actors voicing this dialog. One thing I'd like would be a big of dialog from Jack's "surprise" phone call. Overall, lots of fun!"
Nice story with a nicer twist
"This sounds almost like a dream Wray would have at a convention, then become a full blown nightmare when he discovers the truth. I think the date should have had more detail and maybe you could have an incident with Wray and a fan after he signs Angel's bill. As a quick read it is very good."
