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Her Magical World

"Awesome story. Waiting for the next update."

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Awesome

"I like it so much. Waiting for next chapter.."

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Dream on, Myra. Dream on ...

"Myra feels that she is nothing without her dreams. She lives in a household where she is bossed around by her sister, put down by her mother and mostly ignored by her father. But there is one thing that Myra believes will validate her worth. Winning the all important, once in a life time beauty contest. She becomes a contestant despite her mother’s constant reminder that “ ... if something bad happens to you, I will not be responsible for it.” Despite all odds, Myra wins first place. She proudly brings her trophy home to display for her family ...only to learn that nothing has really changed. Her family is still verbally abusive towards her and each other. Myra falls into a depression wondering why her family still treats her this way, when she won the trophy for being the most pretty. Myra has a surprisingly amount of depth in this story and a good character arc as she learns that winning a beauty contest is not enough to earn her own self respect or fix the problems in her dysfunctional family. There were some punctuation problems and maybe some mild misuse of the English language, but I was able to ignore most of that and simply enjoy the story. I hope Myra grows to realize her own self worth and that she doesn’t need her family support to become successful in life. "

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Nothing to say

"I'm just in love with your story amazing.... nothing to say I'm impatient about the next chapters btw I m in love with the cover.... well done guuuurl❤"

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