4/5 🌟

"I like the idea of the plot, but not the plot. The story kind of bounced around and could use a little bit of fluidity between scenes. Also, if you're going to suddenly change the character POV (as you did with Missy) please make that clear before the story starts. I was so confused, like, "wait-- wasn't this in the first person pov, why is it suddenly in third?". Good job on your dialogue, but your charters action could use a little bit more humanizing, Other than that, I wish you luck on your story and I'll definitely be keeping an eye out for new updates."