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Good story

"Love this story and the characters too. For a fort story from an author โ€˜โ€˜tis is a good plot. Need some spelling corrections along with some wording changes for grammar. For the most part when you read it your mind will insert the words that it needs. Still this is good writing and a good story. Iโ€™d of like a longer story though this is the authorโ€™s story to tell so Iโ€™ll say thank you for sharing your story with all your new readers. Keep writing."

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Wow

"Not what I expected but I still liked it "

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Good

"I really liked the story because it is not like the typical werewolf story where the protagonist has to beg the alpha not to reject her or the alpha treats her badly and she allows it and forgives him and stays with him. In this story she found another alpha and the other one was left alone for rejecting her โค๏ธโค๏ธ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚"

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Former alphas mate

"Wow!! Loved it!! Awesome read!! Enjoyed it !! Thank you for sharing your story with me "

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Cute

"Very cuteness story. I liked that she was firm I her choice no wavering back and forth. "

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Great story

"Read it right through great job"

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Lilbit1976

"Good book. "

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Former Alphas Mate

"Wow! This was an amazing story ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿคฉ"

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Good story

"I don't usually go for age gap story cause they make me feel weird but this was a great story where not once do you feel the age gap but instead you really see the love instead "

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Definitely Luna material!

"I really enjoyed this story I loved how she fought back and how she didnโ€™t just give in to her family so easily โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ"

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Former Alphas Mate

"Pretty good story. You have a lot off grammar errors that took away from your story. It almost made me not want to finish reading it. But Iโ€™m glad I did. "

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Former alphas mate

"I love the story "

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"Damn alyona has came an long way plus she is an badass"

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Former Alpha Mate

"It was good and it was too short. I wanted to know how things with her family. "

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Interesting!!

"Very good keep rocking"

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Beautiful

"Loved the story from start to finish "

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Former Alphas Mate

"Great short story "

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Rejected

"Beautiful story, must read. "

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Firmer alpha's mate

"Short but good, sometimes going to fast but then slow down, is a good story I enjoyed it"

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former alpha mate

"I love this book"

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