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That one night

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Summary

One night Lisa went out. She had no idea what was in store for her. After a fun night with friends Lisa vanashed. Everyone has given up looking for her thinking that she died. Until 3 years later that case reopens with new evidence suspecting the father. Will they be able to find Lisa before time runs out?

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
5
Rating
2.0 1 review
Age Rating
13+

Lisa

It started off like any other night, movie and dinner with friends. I never expected anything. All I remember is walking and feeling dizzy. I tried to breath but it all went black. I remember feeling anxious to get home. I remember walking home.It was cold and it was nasty. They were boxes and a bloody mattress. There was a very vile oder. I'm pretty sure it is mold. I looked around when I heard a voice calling out of the shadows. It was a girl she looked around 15 so close to my age. She asked me to come over to her and help her. I was hesitant at first but got the courage to go to her.

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“Hi” she said

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Hey are you okay? How long have you been here? Where are we?”

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“I don’t know were we are all I know is that he gets really angrier if you talk out of turn. My name is Alisa. And I got here yesterday night I was walking home last night after a party.”

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I looked at her lost in thought I looked at her and said “what did you need help with?”

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I looked down she was chained unlike me. I wonder if she tried to run or something. I pick the lock with my Bobby pin in my hair the I help her to the bed in the far right corner of the basement lookin thing. I carried her to the bed and helped her under the dirty sheets. We started talking again.

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“How did you get chained to the wall” I asked

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“I tried to fight back ,he punched me then chained me up.”

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“What do we do?” I ask with my voice shaking

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“I don’t know we haft to wait and see”

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“Okay, but we can’t do this alone so we stick together”

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“Okay” she gave a small smile

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I have a small smile back. We are going to figure out what to do in the morning but for now we need sleep.

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