Another Star-Crossed Lover

"I didn't expect the story would turn this way. I thought this would be just a story about a past experience, but you had written something different. It was clear that your vocabulary was vast, though I found some typing mistakes. I think you might consider the long paragraphs, since sometimes they could be confusing. Well, I know this is not really helping. I just want to leave some words :) I'm going to read your other short stories. Regards, Kei Angelus"