Inkitt
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Nice

"I like how it feels like real thoughts (a.k.a stream of consciousness) in the way it's kind of random and scattered, and I loved the way the character realized they'd already thought of something; it was a nice touch. It left me curious about the wrongs committed, though. Hints as to what those were would add depth to the character and their plight. I left the story learning very little about them as a person. Otherwise, it's an interesting piece that said a lot in few words and I enjoyed reading it! I'd reccomend it for a quick read."

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