What is your opinion?
Invigorating
"Hello, I really loved this story. I loved that it was a short story and it kept me hanging on the entire time. I needed to know if he got on the train and I was quite disappointed that he did not. I was invested in it and that is very good to have. You want your readers to be invested in the characters and the story. Very good writing and good description. There wasn't a lot of description but enough to make me see the characters. I really enjoyed this. Well done."
Great characterisation
"I liked this story; it immediately drew me in with the descriptions which were sharply drawn and set the scene. The characters are introduced slowly and I liked the contrast between Elise and her energy as opposed to the nonchalant tone of the narrator who is still deciding if he is to cave in to Elise's wild ideas. The dialogue is convincing and well-written in that it shows the contrasting personalities of the characters. I look forward to reading more of the story."
