Hello, I saw your post on the introduce yourself group and read that you are a history buff so I knew I had to take a look at your writing. I am currently taking a history degree in university and so that is what lead me to your page. Anyway, I have read what you have and so far I like it. There are some spelling mistakes and grammatical errors which are easily fixable, like when Hauptmann says "is anyone still alive" it should be murmured not murdered. Anyway a good read through again can pull out these small errors and it makes your story even better then what it already is. I look forward to reading the rest when you post it! I hope this helps you!
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