What is your opinion?
A Great Read
"The storyline itself is great. I am really fascinated and surprised by the backstory of the main character. The historical references you took in making the story were great. I have to admit that some parts of the flow got a bit confusing but should be an easy fix. Your writing style is alright, but I suggest that you practice a bit more and possibly try some apps that would help improve your writing, such as Grammarly. But overall, I am very impressed with the story. I would like to read more of your stories like these. Keep up the good work!"
The Beginning
"Hello, I saw your post on the introduce yourself group and read that you are a history buff so I knew I had to take a look at your writing. I am currently taking a history degree in university and so that is what lead me to your page. Anyway, I have read what you have and so far I like it. There are some spelling mistakes and grammatical errors which are easily fixable, like when Hauptmann says "is anyone still alive" it should be murmured not murdered. Anyway a good read through again can pull out these small errors and it makes your story even better then what it already is. I look forward to reading the rest when you post it! I hope this helps you!"
Immediate Action
"The writer sets the scene vividly and the plot moves forward quickly. The action scenes are well described and well informed. The depiction of violence is convincing and the story fits well into the Action genre. I look forward to seeing how this plot develops further."
