What is your opinion?
I love Ava. :)
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Anonymous
"Hi Ana - thanks for your story. I'm new to Inkitt - and set about looking for books that would pique my interest: Anonymous hit the button. Interesting plot within a plot - I found the second part (After 5 years) easier to read - the flow was smoother, and quicker. What this suggested to me (aside from just being an easier part to read, was the obvious growth in Ava from the young, nervous intern to a practising psychologist. Perhaps because of the heavy slant on technical terms and explanations (which were welcome, nevertheless) that first part was more ponderous. All in all - a good read amd I look forward to seeing where it goes."
Anonymous
"i ussually read other good stories in w3bnvl"
Anonymous
"i want read other good stories like this hmm"
Anonymous
"i love this story"
Anonymous
"i enjoy read this story"
Anonymous
"interesting story"
Anonymous
"The plot of Anonymous keeps the reader guessing as it clearly has a main plot and a sub-plot. Will they intersect at some point? We will have to read on to find out. The pacing was good, quick and tight. I would definitely recommend this story. I do have a couple of suggestions that I think will improve the story overall. The reader doesn't find out where or when the story takes place until Chapter 3. I would really like to see more description of where the characters are; since I can 'hear' their voices, I would also like to be able to 'see' them."
