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This Guy is Funny

"Not only does the Author really seem to know his characters (nailed it), he also is dead right on the Comicon Circuit and his subject. Nathan Fillion and the Executive Producer of Con Man PJ Haarsma really do have a charity for Kids Need to Read and they have a poker tournament at the Phoenix Comicon every year. Funny stuff."

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Great Script

"I could see this as an episode of Con Man. Funny and a quick read! I enjoyed it. The characters are dead on and the plot would fit in anywhere in the Con Man episode timeline. I especially like the fact that it's well rounded. Good beginning, middle, and end. Thank you for sharing your work with us."

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"Con Man: Kids Need to Read"

"I enjoyed the story. I could just see Bobby doing the phone bit and pushing Wrey around. It was a very Con Man styled story."

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Full house

"Loved this story. So many key points touched upon: Jack's not there: check Wray's uncomfortable: check Bobbie's a little creepy and invasive: check Kids need to Read mention: check reference to space cowboys: check fun twist ending: check ...Huckleberry: 5 points to Gryffindor! I can see this being produced as a scene from ConMan, It would absolutely kick ass if Val Kilmer could play the cowboy. It would be even more fun if Kilmer played the coordinator and Laurence Fishburne played the cowboy. It would also be fun to have the guys from Tenacious D play Fat Pat and Large Marge. They do charity stuff all the time, and they would totally do it For The Children. Minor quibbles: the formatting was a little frustrating as there was much scrolldownage. Also there's a difference between a montage & a Montague. A montage brings everything together. A Montague is a lovelorn Renaissance mafioso with romantic delusions."

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